Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Outside Reading Book: 4th Quarter Reflections

I wonder If Justin really does have feelings for Ellynor. He seems to like her, and she seems to like him, it is just that she keeps trying to avoid him. Justin keeps trying to get closer to Ellynor and she keeps trying to avoid.. Is Justin obsessed? He said before he hasn’t really “loved” someone, so it might be him trying to show it and not just doing it just to do it. It kind of depends on what Ellynor wants to do with him and try to get out of the Lumanen Covenant. If Justin would stop trying to see Ellynor, then maybe she would want to see him more and leave with him back to the Lirrens.

If I were in Justin’s situation, I would leave Ellynor, and not get into anything that would ruin his abnormal life. He is a Kings Rider and there is no need for him to actually love this girl who is more than likely too young for him anyways. They will always be different and that is how it will be. He needs to know that. Plus if I were in Tayse’s situation, I would have married Senneth, but tried to keep his status as a Kings Rider as well. If he can’t, then where is he going to turn? Where else would he go if he can’t seem to do anything that would help him, or Senneth? He can’t do anything about losing his status if he loses it, so shouldn’t he be trying to find some other type of mercenary job just in case? I would and I think Senneth needs to know that as well.

If Justin keeps trying to see Ellynor, then how is he going to keep seeing Tayse and Senneth and Kirra and Donnal, Even Cammon? He would lose them all and there would be nothing he could do about it until he finally figures out that he can’t have Ellynor, Just like Tayse can’t Have Senneth, even though he did propose. It would hurt their reputation as a Kings Rider. What will the other Riders think of Justin and Tayse? He wouldn’t be getting far if he kept doing what he is doing. Plus even ruining their rep by being two of the beat Riders that they have ever had, would probably kill them all and the King would lose his throne.  I don’t think they would want to see that.

                Although it seems that Donnal loves Kirra, that she doesn’t love him back. It seems to me that Kirra loves Justin, But Justin loves Ellynor. How does that work out? Since Donnal had promised to stay by Kirra’s side even though he had to leave. Plus Donnal actually told Kirra into the face that he loved her. Does she love him as so?  Donnal might be jealous thinking that Kirra loves Justin because she is spending more time with Justin that him. It could be a jealousy factor.  That is what I think it is, but Kirra might just be very good friends with Justin. It even seems like Justin might like Senneth as well even though she is with Tayse at the moment. I won’t know until I get farther into the book.

                I’m not sure on how the book is going to end since there are so many turns and twists that you need a paper and pen to keep up. Since Justin is going to need to learn how to leave Ellynor and for Donnal to get over Kirra and Justin. It will have its own course. It will have to be how he needs it to be and how the author makes it. Sharon Shinn makes the book very interesting and a good way to keep you reading, but she also can make it kind of difficult if you don’t follow the whole book. So let’s see how far it leads and hopefully it will resolve itself. If not, then I expect for there to be some sort of drama.

Saturday, April 16, 2011

Concrete Poem( The worst one yet :D )

PLOP! PLOP! PLOP! PLOP!
The ball in my hand.
I throw the ball down the lane.
I'm scared about not getting a strike.
I got 1!

Thursday, April 14, 2011

Parent Letter

Dear Sharon and Father:
Have you always wanted something that you know you cannot have without parent consent? Since I have something that I want, but I cannot have that unless you will help me with it. It is indefinitely my grounding. I have changed dramatically and even though I do not show it, I have and I learned that I need to show instead of just trying to tell you. It makes it easier to show it than not to. I know what I did was wrong, and that I might have taken it off the limb, but it will not ever happen again. I did not like it before, nor will I ever try again. I would like my grounding removed for multiple reasons, some of which being that I can prove that I won’t let you down, to also tell you that I have learned my lesson, and that the whole punishment has been extremely effective.
            I know that you would have the way of saying that my grounding is for my own good and that I was the one who caused it, but even if it is, how can it be if I am always suffering all the time? This punishment does help, and it was very effective. I just want my life back. I have learned my lesson and I want it back. I wouldn’t let you down, not for an instant. I would do what you ask me to do, and even do more! I will go up and beyond to ease the stress around the house and do even more than what you two ask me to do. I just want everything back and to actually have 1v1 time with dad. I feel it might help. So let’s work together and finish this punishment once and for all.
            I think my grounding should be removed because I have learned my lesson. I really want everything back. I want everything back for my gaming, And not to be bored. The gaming that I need to finish is Dragon Age, Need for Speed Hot Pursuit, and my football as well. Then I can enjoy life knowing those are finished and not have to worry about them anymore. I could also know that I can enjoy life knowing also that if I were to mess up, I can regroup from that and not make the same mistakes, which I doubt would happen again since I don’t want to lose everything again. I have learned my lesson and feel that I won’t make the same mistake again. This is one of my reasons for wanting my grounding removed.
            My other reason for writing this paper and to ask you about my grounding is that the punishment was effective and feel that you should give me a second try to prove myself.  My kids would want to hear funny stories about when I was a kid and want to have some to tell them when I get older. If I actually do have kids, I want to tell them I had the best parents that anyone else could have. I have always wanted to know that I have amazing parents and right now, it just does not seem like it. It seems like everyone is turning on me and making me seem like the bad person. I could even say I had a amazing childhood. So show me that you care for me and hopefully remove my grounding. Even shortening it would be appreciated.
            So as you can see, I think I put up one heck of an argument, wouldn’t you agree? My reasons took me awhile to come up with since I want to have a good argument. You might agree, but you also might disagree, I am not here to make that decision. That is up to you. So please, remove my grounding, make it shorter, do whatever you can just to relieve me from this torture.
Your Loving Son,

Justin Leon
                                                                        d(0.0)b

My Riddle Poem

The Devils plentiful Treasure
 
I’m as black as midnight, but light as day.
I can be seen during the day, but indivisible at night.
People resemble me as a king’s rider; embroidered in silver and black,
Can you guess who thy I?


I strike fear when someone sees me,
Black, devious, and full of killing and deaths.
People scream in panic to get away from my master.
Or else, their gone.


I like watching people scream when they see me.
I even like people showing motionless, covered in blood.
I like doing what my master says, which is of course kill,
But most of all, I like doing what you tell me to do.


May you guess who I might be?
But I warn thee, three tries is all thou shall have.
But then if thou are wrong, it’s your life that shall be mine.

Acrostic Poem

Justified
Unified with my mind,body, and soul
Sociable
Techno Freak!!!
Intelligent
Not Endurable